Landscape Design Perspective

This is my favorite line drawing perspective. Most Designers/Architects who do manual perspective are so caught up with color rendering they forget about composition. I was that way. The head of our team then did not allow me to do colors until I get my line drawing right. Now I like to do line drawing more than just coloring perspectives whether in color pencils, water color, markers... or even in photoshop. This is not the best, but this is the first one I think I might have gotten right. There was not much to see in the landscape design and the lead designer wanted to show the path from the tent structure, for some reasons. As a perspectivist, the challenge would be how to make a bland lanscape design look interesting in the perspective drawing? I don't know if I got the right solution. And yes I cheated on the angle a bit. Also, our boss didn't like willows, but somehow I got away with it

Here's another view of the same project:[link]